Lovely poem, but this time, I do have a problem with the way it’s written. Not only does it not scan properly (even I can tell that the meter of the entire poem is completely ruined in the third and seventh lines), but it also destroys the ABAB CDCD rhyme scheme that was supposedly set up from the first line of the first stanza. Perhaps Wiley should go back to Poetry Writing 101 after all!
Lovely poem, but this time, I do have a problem with the way it’s written. Not only does it not scan properly (even I can tell that the meter of the entire poem is completely ruined in the third and seventh lines), but it also destroys the ABAB CDCD rhyme scheme that was supposedly set up from the first line of the first stanza. Perhaps Wiley should go back to Poetry Writing 101 after all!