I’m hoping for a coherent storyline to emerge at some point. We’ve got the trans line, the divorce line, Mimi suddenly wanting to be a golf pro, the crazy coach at the other school story line, Gil’s son and crazy coach’s son as friends, the over-the-top drill (which just keeps getting more over the top), and three or four others. Call me simple-minded (and I’m sure someone will reply I am) but I’d like a clearly defined arc. Oh, I’ll take a couple sub-plots that extend beyond the main arc, and may presage the next arc or continue on through several arcs, but at the moment it feels unfocused.
I’m hoping for a coherent storyline to emerge at some point. We’ve got the trans line, the divorce line, Mimi suddenly wanting to be a golf pro, the crazy coach at the other school story line, Gil’s son and crazy coach’s son as friends, the over-the-top drill (which just keeps getting more over the top), and three or four others. Call me simple-minded (and I’m sure someone will reply I am) but I’d like a clearly defined arc. Oh, I’ll take a couple sub-plots that extend beyond the main arc, and may presage the next arc or continue on through several arcs, but at the moment it feels unfocused.